Commemorative Speech (10%) (2 minutes)

 

Think of the moments when language floored or elevated you:

imagine hearing, "I love you," for the 1st time;

imagine hearing, "Your sister has died." 

 

Think of those moments when a sentence is legally binding:  

at marriage/commitment ceremonies, the couple says “I do;”

when the judge declares that an accused killer is “innocent.” 

In both cases, the phrase/sentence creates a new legal reality.

 

When Barack Obama raises his hand and takes the oath of office, he becomes the President. Until that day, G.W. Bush remains the leader of the United States.  

 

This pragmatic use of language is detailed in Stephen Austin’s book, How to Do Things with Words. Austin's point is that, more than we admit,  

Language creates reality.

 

If it is to be a special day, then language will be part of what makes it special.

Graduations, and other legal events are made special -- and legal -- with language.

Your last speech is a COMMEMORATIVE SPEECH.

 

What is the Rhetorical Situation? At your celebratory party following your own graduation, you are expected to give a compelling and inspiring speech. Your Aunt has an envelope, and your speech should make her glad to give it to you.

 

Commemorative speeches depend on the creative and subtle use of language.

Main Purpose: Inspire;

Secondary purposes: Provide information; Express feelings; stir sentiment.

 

Your graduation toast is in the same genre as the eulogy. Both types use language to memorialize and to stir emotions. However, your speech should be:

celebratory;

gracious;

 grateful;

relieved;

anticipatory.

Length:  2 minutes

 

Who is the Audience? As diverse as you will encounter, unless you run for President.

Your family of all ages and backgrounds; your friends of all backgrounds; your professors and friends from speech class, if you invite us! Wee children and your ancient auntie—and they all want to hear you speak to them.

 

No slang.

Be cautious with jokes.

Acknowledge those who helped you.

Acknowledge your own hard work and struggle.

Anticipate the future you now have with your graduation behind you.

Conclude clearly.